Cliché fixer

“spread my wings”: the cliché, and what to write instead

“Spread my wings” is on the Wackometer's list of worn-out phrases. Your listener has heard it so many times they finish it before you do, and that's the moment they stop listening.

Fresh swaps for “spread my wings”

  • roll the windows down
  • kick off my shoes
  • stretch like a cat in the sun

These are starting points. The best swap is the one only you could write: a real place, a real object, a real moment.

How to fix any cliché

  1. Ask what the phrase is trying to say (heartbreak, freedom, devotion).
  2. Find one object or moment from your own life that shows it.
  3. Describe that thing plainly. Specific beats poetic.

Paste your lyrics into the Wackometer and it highlights every cliché it knows. Tap one to swap it in place.

How wack are your lyrics?

Paste a verse into the Wackometer. It scores it from Wicked to Wack, circles the clichés and lazy rhymes, and shows you how to fix them.

Weigh my lyrics, free