Cliché fixer

“fallen angel”: the cliché, and what to write instead

“Fallen angel” is on the Wackometer's list of worn-out phrases. Your listener has heard it so many times they finish it before you do, and that's the moment they stop listening.

Fresh swaps for “fallen angel”

• a saint with a parking ticket
• a halo in the lost and found
• a choir kid at the after-party

These are starting points. The best swap is the one only you could write: a real place, a real object, a real moment.

How to fix any cliché

1. Ask what the phrase is trying to say (heartbreak, freedom, devotion).
2. Find one object or moment from your own life that shows it.
3. Describe that thing plainly. Specific beats poetic.

Paste your lyrics into the Wackometer and it highlights every cliché it knows. Tap one to swap it in place.