“end of time”: the cliché, and what to write instead
“End of time” is on the Wackometer's list of worn-out phrases. Your listener has heard it so many times they finish it before you do, and that's the moment they stop listening.
Fresh swaps for “end of time”
- till the streetlights quit
- till the last bus stops running
- till the sun runs out of battery
These are starting points. The best swap is the one only you could write: a real place, a real object, a real moment.
How to fix any cliché
- Ask what the phrase is trying to say (heartbreak, freedom, devotion).
- Find one object or moment from your own life that shows it.
- Describe that thing plainly. Specific beats poetic.
Paste your lyrics into the Wackometer and it highlights every cliché it knows. Tap one to swap it in place.